Rikku dressing up | Adobe photoshop 5.5

This one was a mere sketch of rikku......just lined it out n then started CGing it ^^ I wanna add some more to the background.....but i dunno wat since shes standing at the corner of the room @_@
EDIT: ack! i jus woke up to find out that everythings is wrong(well...not everything =P)in this pic ><
(also read a few comments from forums)....so im gonna fix this up :)

EDIT 2: I'd like to thank 421 on helping me point out a few mistakes that I know but couldnt fix XD
youre the greatest! XD
This one is the ...ugly version =P